Breathless

by elli_unleashed   Feb 2, 2007


The moon emits a shadow across my body,
Leaving me exposed and alone in this dark world of loneliness.
I sit alone in a shallow pool of tears,
Whispering a prayer, I love you, I confess.
Shadows dance across me as I wait for you to rescue me from the dark,
The stars shimmer in the night sky, lulling me into dreams of you so sweet.
I feel the warmth of your skin drawing me in,
My love is forever true, an emotion no one can defeat.
You kiss me with satin lips and touch my face,
With the passion of a god.
The wind rustles with sudden chill as I awake to see your beautiful aqua eyes,
It has been a long path you come to cross and one less to trod.
Yet, you take my hand in yours as we set out on another adventure,
Into the forest and across the seas.
You answered my prayer of reclaimed love,
Forever will you leave me breathless...

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  • 16 years ago

    by TrueLovesVictim

    I really liked this peom of yours.... sad to confess but i haven't read any of yours until today and im kinda hooked. haha. great job and keep up the great work.

    <3Mary

  • 17 years ago

    by Pamela

    I read every single one of your poems and I don't think as long as I've been here I've found anyone who is such a majestic writer. This one really paints a picture for me as I wish that someone would come and save me from my pain and misery. All your poems are so good. It's so amazing.

    Pamela:)

  • 17 years ago

    by elli_unleashed

    Thanx for reading my poem everyone leave comments or advice and i'll read your poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Thhe name of your poem is how i felt @ the end of it! it was just ... wow! well done.. could u read some of my poems plz????

  • 17 years ago

    by elli_unleashed

    Thanx kayla i'll take your advice