Comments : From a girl's eyes...

  • 10 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Love the poem...I think u hav a talent
    comment bac

  • 10 years ago

    by MidnightKisses

    OMG!! i soooooooooo love this poem.. it's one of the best i have read so far!! this is wut i feel like bout my bf n shit.. ur awesome writer!

  • 10 years ago

    by Erica Jovie©

    I like how you just tell it how it is and speak from your heart!! keep it up!! (thanks for the comment!!) God bless!

  • 10 years ago

    by Kasie

    Wow...this poem is very touching. I can't really relate to it well...but i can feel your emotion. well 5/5 keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Liz

    Omg that was just beautiful
    "a surprise,
    something Ive never felt before
    you made my heart soar"
    ^my fav line^
    thanx for commenting
    and omg i love your writing also!
    -liz-
    =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Daniel J

    Lovely poem, great concepts and I do like the title (something people tend to neglect to comment on :p) - it was the title which drew me to the poem. Which is, I say it again, a brilliant concept.

  • 10 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Very nice poem. i really enjoyed readin the rhymings. great job! keep it up. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Kelso

    Another great poem by you 5/5. You have such great talent. I love the poem its wow so many people can relate to it. any ways comment back. && can you comment on my new poem untilted..
    **Thanks Kelsey**

  • 10 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Then you kissed me on my lips
    and my leg began to dip
    the chemistry between us was amazing
    it was what I had been craving
    forever

    i can relate to this part of the poem pperfectly!! this is so true and it is exactly how a girl sees it!

    xoxo becca

  • 10 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    I am 13 and in 8th grade. wil is 15 but his mom dropped us off at this strip mall so we walked around for about to 2 hours. what grade are you in?

    wil..he is tall, big blue eye, skinny..w/ abs (woohoo), brown hair (kinda long/skater cut), almost always wears a hat, he had never kissed a girl til he met me (YaY...i'm gonna teach him a thing or two..haha)...thats about it i guess...descride what shane looks like...

    xoxo becca

  • 10 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Oh yeah...what does btw stand for?

  • 10 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Ooooo ok! that helps...lol

    awe..he sounds good looking. do u play any sports?

  • 10 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Haha...awesome! i wish that i could dance...some of my friends do..but i have NO rhythm...lol. i play volley ball and soccer. i focus a lot of my attention on volleyball cuz i have been playing it longer. one day soon i am going to write a volleyball poem...but i'm not in a writing poetry mood right now. lol

  • 10 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Ok...well...i have dark brown hair but right now it is dyed light brown. i may seem like a city girl but deep down i love to be out in the county. my parents are divorse and my mom is now remarried. i live with my mom and my step-dad..though secretly i want to go live with my real dad. poetry is my way of escaping reality! lol. i love music....i am always listening to it. i am christian...are you? if not then what religion do u have?

    thats just a little bit about me i will tell u more later! tell me about you now...

    xoxo becca

  • 10 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Haha...awesome! well i can't drive (or atleast not legaly!) and well i have to go for right now but i will get back on in a little while...comment me back!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Haha...that is awesome! you r lucky that you get to see him all the time! we see each other once a week but i hope that since his mom has met me that she will let us hang out more often! haha.

    xoxo becca

  • 10 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    I am going to see him at church!!! YaY! i am making me some mac and cheese right now and i am about to eat it! YUM! lol.

    xoxo becca

  • 10 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Ok...i am back! we didn't kiss or anything (cuz it was church and there was a lot of people around) but we hugged and he had his arm around me...woohoo! did you ever get to see shane?

  • 10 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Woohoo...ya'll kissed...lol! me and will kissed for the first time on friday night inside of a store...lol. i finished my project about two hours ago! yay.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mandy

    Awww tht cyute! wow tht kinda weird cause i used to know a guy named shane...but its prob not the same person...tht would be kinda weird if it was!!! but yea tht great that you get to hang out together! like i had this bf and i really really liked him...but his parents found out about us goin out so he had to break up with me! but thn like a week l8r he went out with this s-l-u-t! and now he's goin out with someone else!! blah! lol well gtg c/b