Special Memories

by Connie   Feb 3, 2007


Memories grow more precious
Of those carefree childhood days
Jumping rope and playing hopscotch
With our neighborhood friends all day.

Sunday visits with the grandparents
Food and laughter all around
Knowing and enjoying one another
That's what it's really all about.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    5/5 i really liked this one. it had a nice flow and was easy to read and to understand.

    i was nice if it was a little longer though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    That is definitely what it is all about.. i couldnt have said it any better myself.. you've taken the greatest parts of life and put them all together.. a beautiful poem.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =)

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    I couldn't agree more those memories do grow more precious.well done with this one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ItS fascinatinG..... mE luV yR writingS....

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Synh

    Was this poem supposed to rhyme? I couldn't tell because you used 'days' and 'day', which dont rhyme because they are essentially the same word and 'around' and 'about' don't rhyme, either, unless you say it in a funny way.

    You should've gone on with the poem. It seems uncomplete, as if you took a saw and cut out middle part. Feels like something is missing from it.

    I did enjoy the poem, although, at the end, you could've been more clear on what you meant by 'that's what it's all about'. What's 'it'? Life? Memories? Childhood? I couldn't tell.

    Good poem.

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