Comments : My Dreams [2]

  • 10 years ago

    by shawn

    This was very good, i enjoyed this poem, it was rather vivid and depicted my dreams as well.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    It sounds like this is more of a nightmare than a dream? Maybe it's just the way I interpreted it? Nontheless, it was a great poem/ 5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    OH MY GOSH! i love this poem.. amazing word choice.. great flow and good imagery.. spectacular write!

  • 10 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Great job. i really like this poem. i love the way it turned out. one thing though. in the 4th line of the first stanza, there should be a comma after only.

    but great job. DEFINITALLY an amazing! poem!

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Beatiful write.. great word choice.. and flawless flow.. a very enjoyable read.. nice work

  • 10 years ago

    by firexdancer

    I hav to agree with all of them!
    but ya, this really feels like one of my beautiful nightmares, write more!
    luv gabriella

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Fantastic!!
    Wow, I'm speechless, for once. Lol.
    That was purely fantastic. Your wording was perfect, you can't improve at all with this poem. You've got a lot of talent, keep it up!! =] 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 10 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awsome poem...this would b kool in the dark section....but it sorta makes me have the chills owells a 5/5 for me =)

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Oh this is a great poem. i know that this is awesome. this is wonderful

    excellent 5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought this was beautifully written.
    The imagery and wording were such a pleasure to read.
    I thought the whole piece flowed well and you did a wonderful job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Omg i loved this such strong emotion nice job!!

  • 10 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Love it. It reminds me of my dreams as well.
    "Creating images of fairytale lands
    Though, deep inside I see untrue"
    Very TRue

  • 10 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    I think this is my favorite poem out of all that i have read, again very good wording... your writing style is different from so many people keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Gorgeous.
    "Creating images of fairytale lands"
    That line was so powerful and touching. I really enjoyed reading a poem of such beauty. I have enjoyed reading alot of your poems look forward to seeing more by you. ~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    I think a very good definition of dreams
    it is so amazing im going to add this to my favorites.