"And sang to melodies" (I think you misspelled that)
but I really liked that. It was really full of eaning if I was right in saying that it was about heaven and hell. I am a christian and really understand. My favorite part is where you said "I need a sign
From where, I don't care
Someone tell me where to go
I was never good with directions
I feel so lost and alone "
It's more typical, and realistic, or maybe even modern I think, but it doesnt really go with the sescriptive flow on the other hand. Either way I like it. lol
Well have come to a time in life where were going to have to make a huge decision and choose one thing over another, this decision will determine what you become for the rest of your life. It's a decision that only you can make, amazing poem 5/5