Comments : Which Way

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    I thought that this poem was very well written. I liked the general theme you went with. the only thing is that this line,

    "This path seems to have many unwelcoming possibilities"

    is wayy wordy. other than that, it was wonderful! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Cute poem.. good word choice and nice flow.. a little cliche.. but still good job!

  • 10 years ago

    by ellewen

    "And sang to melodies" (I think you misspelled that)
    but I really liked that. It was really full of eaning if I was right in saying that it was about heaven and hell. I am a christian and really understand. My favorite part is where you said "I need a sign
    From where, I don't care
    Someone tell me where to go
    I was never good with directions
    I feel so lost and alone "

    It's more typical, and realistic, or maybe even modern I think, but it doesnt really go with the sescriptive flow on the other hand. Either way I like it. lol

    keep it up

    ~skittles

  • 10 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    I like this poem. but the flow is a little off. but its an easy fix. great job. and keep it up beacause it seems to me like a lot of your poems are heartfelt. great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Yet another beautifully written poem. I liked it, however I feel the structure was a bit off, perhaps breaking it into Stanzas would help. Other than that amazing write like always.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I give it a five because it had character. A poem that has character have nothing else. I believe that this poem speaks to everyone's character.

    You're very good. I think that your a very good poet and I have added you to my favorite list.

    Thank you for always commenting on my poems. I try to return the favor as much as I can. If you ever want to talk i'm always around.

  • 10 years ago

    by firexdancer

    That was goood
    i love the way it flows, and it is really beautiful, i can really relate to it
    luv gabriella

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Mmm.
    Interesting & Unique.
    Life has choices & most of the time we don't know which way to go.
    The poem spoke for itself & it was written wonderfully.
    Fantastic job, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really touching and way different,you did a good job,especially those

    To cry unheard tears and bleed misery
    I need a sign
    From where, I don't care

    Keep it up honey,5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by just a little girl

    I think everyone has felt like that at some point in their lives, they don't know which choice to make or if indeed their choice is a good one, the words were well choosen and touching, well done 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by just a little girl

    I think everyone has felt like that at some point in their lives, they don't know which choice to make or if indeed their choice is a good one, the words were well choosen and touching, well done 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Well have come to a time in life where were going to have to make a huge decision and choose one thing over another, this decision will determine what you become for the rest of your life. It's a decision that only you can make, amazing poem 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Great job. Very original! My favorite part was
    "Between a life in the dark
    Never knowing the meaning
    Of a love named true"

  • 10 years ago

    by Kristina

    Awww this is really sad, but i like it and i can relate to it. good job on it! if you need to talk i'm here =] 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 10 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    I loved this line, it really jumped out to me,
    To cry unheard tears and bleed misery.
    it was mesmerizing. well done babe

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 10 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I thought this was somewhat weird that it's in the love section, but I suppose that's because this poem is about being confused about love? and which way to go to find some truth about it?

    Once again, it was a wonderful read. Not my favourite of yours, but good nonetheless.