You stupid boy you

by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   Feb 5, 2007


You held me close
never to let me go
you said you cared
you told me you loved me
never to let our love fade
you said you knew what love was
you told me about her
how she was your dream
then i found out that you were all scheme
you never loved me
you dont know what that is
you stipid boy you
i love you and always will
but this broken heart will never heal

well my heart will heal i just dont want it to right now. written after i lost what i thought was the love of my life. now i know theres more i should be worried about than love at 16

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  • 17 years ago

    by No one feels as I do

    This poem is close to the one I wrote. Good job =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem, a few mistakes i found, one fix stipid in the title, it should read "You Stupid Boy You", and some capitalizing mistakes in the poem, maybe a few commas, but overall this is a pefect poem, i give it a 5/5!!!

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