Comments : When You Lie Beside Me

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    That was so beautifully written.
    Great Job.

  • 17 years ago

    by d3zzy

    The poem flow was excellent

  • 17 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    =) liked this one alot..

  • 16 years ago

    by Qpid

    Aww i love this poem!..its so sweet!..well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dead Is The New Alive

    Awwe its so cute who ever this girl is she is lucky...good job keep it up
    _forever carly_

  • 16 years ago

    by Serena

    Wow.. i'm practically speechless!!! that was an increddably awesome poem!!! well written, an i can see everything that was going on, only by readin g it! totally thrilling!!!

    $erena