A dream of mine that I can pursue of what I've been wanting and having a hunger for a long time.
A dream is but a dream until you make it a reality.
If you fail at what you do,keep striving on what you want to pursue.
Never give up and never say never.
Keep the faith,read the word,and keep striving for your dream.
Hmm. This poem seemed a little scattered to me. The words were good, but I think you might need to tie them together a bit better. Also, I think you should maybe add more it was a little short, add some more metaphors perhaps? Just some things you might want to think about to make you poem better.