Wow.. your poetry is way better than mine! its awsome, i absolutely loved this part
"whispering in the shadows,
flowers blooming in peeps of light,
monsters in the shallows
voices in a rise of light,
I won'tt sleep tonight"
Hey, loved it!!! the wording was amazing!!! i especially liked,
Morbid Images become a obsession,
Sounds from below teach you a lesson,
Eccentric heart you wish to see,
Cold foe's torment,begging for serenity,
well done bub
Haha, at the end you said it was based on a drean, and all through this poem I kept thinking this sounded like a dream/nightmare. It seriously sent chills down my spine. You are very good at descriptive words, they make your poems more.. well just more. I really liked this one!