Comments : Rapture

  • 10 years ago

    by rene

    Wow i really liked this poem. i loved the way you made it rhyme. it was a great poem.
    and thanks for commenting on mine
    hope to here more from you as you probably from me

  • 10 years ago

    by Lethmelodis

    Strong rhyming and well written. Good job.

    Thanks for the comment on my mine also, btw.

  • 10 years ago

    by luna bella

    Truly great write , great rhyming, loved your poem

  • 10 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    Wow.. your poetry is way better than mine! its awsome, i absolutely loved this part
    "whispering in the shadows,
    flowers blooming in peeps of light,
    monsters in the shallows
    voices in a rise of light,
    I won'tt sleep tonight"

  • 10 years ago

    by Denysia

    I like it. great job

  • 10 years ago

    by beav

    Hey dark demise! i love this. great word usage. it's a little trippy like a dream. i give it a 5. look forward to more of your work! -beav

  • 10 years ago

    by Erin

    Love this poem. really good words and everything . keep up the good work 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Besides a few capitalizations that don't make sense, this is a great poem. Very powerful word choice. I loved it. Great write! 5/5

    marcella

  • 10 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is really good. it's a very different type of poem that i usually read, so i like it a lot. i think you did really good on it! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    This was good nice work i didnt get it at first lol cuz im a litttle slow but its nice

  • 10 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Hey, loved it!!! the wording was amazing!!! i especially liked,
    Morbid Images become a obsession,
    Sounds from below teach you a lesson,
    Eccentric heart you wish to see,
    Cold foe's torment,begging for serenity,
    well done bub

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Whoa this poem was really great. i mean it. keep writing, this poem was very exciting to read

    5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    It seems to always happen like that. you make poems just b4 bed. well i do. this is unique.

    5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Wow, now that was good. I especially loved the last line - a great way to close it. Good work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow! Poems that you write in the middle of the night always seem better than the ones you write when you're wide awake! great job! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    I think this was wonderfully written. Dreams are so bizarre, and you portrayed that well, with strong vocabulary and imagery. Nicely penned.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 9 years ago

    by Cayce

    Haha, at the end you said it was based on a drean, and all through this poem I kept thinking this sounded like a dream/nightmare. It seriously sent chills down my spine. You are very good at descriptive words, they make your poems more.. well just more. I really liked this one!

    Cayce xx

  • Aw, this is such a good poem. I love the image I got from this. The flow worked so perfect. I've had dreams kind of like this, but I love the way you described it. Good job!

    .:CiNdY:.