I like this a lot, but to me, it seems unfinished. It's as if you wrote the first two stanzas of a really good poem, but forgot to finish it. It doesn't seem to come to a close.

Other than that, it's very well written. Good job.

Short and direct holding so much emotion which was greatly portrayed with an amazing flow which was flawless. Well done with this. i think you put alot of effort into it and expressed it truthfully. ~mel

Thats a great poem! 5/5
If you get a chance can you take a look at mine?? There not as good as yours but there something! thx

This has to be the best poem I've read. I'm so putthing this on my favorite poems. I love your writing even tho this is the first time I'm reading your poems. I'll comment more!

This was a good poem but the ending was a good staement but I didnt think it complomented the poem as a whole I enjoyed it and it was good Plot121

I like a lot this poem and I also like your style of writing...Congratulations,you have done a great work.Take good care of you.Best regards,Michelle XxXx

Another good one, flow nicely, easy read, good rhythm. I like the way it ends...