Comments : My Forever Valentine

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I was a bit lost in that second stanza..I'm not sure if I was reading it wrong or if it was missing words...haha I was probably reading it wrong

    My favorite part was the ending! What a deep way to end the poem I just love it!! I dont even have a lover and I love writing and reading Valentines day poems!!

    Loved this
    Chels (A.I.D)

  • 10 years ago

    by FrozenTearsBleed

    Hmm, this poem honestly was really confussing. It jumped from this to that. and really mad little since I gave it a 2.5/5 just keep trying youll so get it! comment mine.

  • 10 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    I think I actually got the poem: Don't know if that means I can identify with older people's writing (But not old old lol I promise you're not) or that I jsut happened to get it by chance.

  • 10 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    A valentine forevermore. good concept

    your servant:
    david

  • 10 years ago

    by kiara

    This was so sweet the second stanza made sense to me but it seemed to lose a bit of the flow i luved in the 1st and last stanza
    bravo

  • 10 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Luanne,

    I enjoyed this write and like the way yoiu started it and wrapped it up. Beautifully crafted.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Luanne
    What a beautiful poem.
    Great moutains spill and
    the earth does quake
    love sometimes teeters
    but you will always remain

    How beautiful! I love the message you added at the bottom. Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by ~MaRiAh~

    Wow. dude that poem was great, i loved it, really. and then the ending was so deep it just really made me think.

    keep it up
    miah

  • 10 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Great moutains spill and
    the earth does quake
    love sometimes teeters
    but you will always remain
    ~~

    Very well said, dear friend. If you have that kind of love that can stand the quakes of life then hold fast to it and fight the perils.

    You have once again given a standing in which we all try to strive for.

    Wonderful and very beautifully done
    Jeannie

  • 10 years ago

    by Juanita

    I love the poem its great! It was written a bit strong which makes it better. I find it to be very true and the authors note true as well.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    Excellent poem Lu.
    I think a lot of people need to take heed of the authors note at the end.
    You managed to say so much with so little words.
    I love it
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Cathy

    This is a beautiful poem, you express so much emotion in it. I understood it just fine. And thank you very much for your comment on my poem I really appreciated it. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Rebekah

    Lovely poem, keep up da good work

  • 10 years ago

    by Melissa

    Nice! ^_^

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Just to be human and love, and be loved.... is all you can ask for.....
    to make mistakes is a human thing we all do...love changes everything...

  • 10 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WHOOT!!!!!! You know...I'm in total awe right now!!!! You did it!!!! You blew me away!!!!!!!!! DAMN!!!! You're writing is breautiful!!!!! You should be proud of this gift, for you have been blessed!!!!!!!!!!!!! LUanne you are brilliant...amazing....admirable to say the least!!!!! Beautiful write!

  • 10 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem I really liked it , yet more of a shakespeare twist to it to me ,great write, hope to read more of your writings , it was a pleasure to read, keep up the great work, your friend Tracy

  • 10 years ago

    by Johnathan

    Hi

    A totally awesome poem!! Loved every bit of it. It has deep meaning, but still communicates well. I agree with Natalie, it's truly admirable!!

    Hope to read many more like this from you!

    Johno

  • 10 years ago

    by Devon

    Cool! finally i found someone that can write a proper poem! great stuff! keep up the good work!

  • 9 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    You are a very good writer, keep it up ^^

    5/5