I was a bit lost in that second stanza..I'm not sure if I was reading it wrong or if it was missing words...haha I was probably reading it wrong

My favorite part was the ending! What a deep way to end the poem I just love it!! I dont even have a lover and I love writing and reading Valentines day poems!!

Loved this
Chels (A.I.D)

Hmm, this poem honestly was really confussing. It jumped from this to that. and really mad little since I gave it a 2.5/5 just keep trying youll so get it! comment mine.

I think I actually got the poem: Don't know if that means I can identify with older people's writing (But not old old lol I promise you're not) or that I jsut happened to get it by chance.

A valentine forevermore. good concept

your servant:
david

This was so sweet the second stanza made sense to me but it seemed to lose a bit of the flow i luved in the 1st and last stanza
bravo

Luanne,

I enjoyed this write and like the way yoiu started it and wrapped it up. Beautifully crafted.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Luanne
What a beautiful poem.
Great moutains spill and
the earth does quake
love sometimes teeters
but you will always remain

How beautiful! I love the message you added at the bottom. Take Care Cindy

Wow. dude that poem was great, i loved it, really. and then the ending was so deep it just really made me think.

keep it up
miah

Great moutains spill and
the earth does quake
love sometimes teeters
but you will always remain
~~

Very well said, dear friend. If you have that kind of love that can stand the quakes of life then hold fast to it and fight the perils.

You have once again given a standing in which we all try to strive for.

Wonderful and very beautifully done
Jeannie

I love the poem its great! It was written a bit strong which makes it better. I find it to be very true and the authors note true as well.

Excellent poem Lu.
I think a lot of people need to take heed of the authors note at the end.
You managed to say so much with so little words.
I love it
5/5
*Gem*

This is a beautiful poem, you express so much emotion in it. I understood it just fine. And thank you very much for your comment on my poem I really appreciated it. 5/5

Lovely poem, keep up da good work

Nice! ^_^

Just to be human and love, and be loved.... is all you can ask for.....
to make mistakes is a human thing we all do...love changes everything...

WHOOT!!!!!! You know...I'm in total awe right now!!!! You did it!!!! You blew me away!!!!!!!!! DAMN!!!! You're writing is breautiful!!!!! You should be proud of this gift, for you have been blessed!!!!!!!!!!!!! LUanne you are brilliant...amazing....admirable to say the least!!!!! Beautiful write!

Excellent poem I really liked it , yet more of a shakespeare twist to it to me ,great write, hope to read more of your writings , it was a pleasure to read, keep up the great work, your friend Tracy

Hi

A totally awesome poem!! Loved every bit of it. It has deep meaning, but still communicates well. I agree with Natalie, it's truly admirable!!

Hope to read many more like this from you!

Johno

Cool! finally i found someone that can write a proper poem! great stuff! keep up the good work!

You are a very good writer, keep it up ^^

5/5