Comments : Fallen Angel

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. It is like you poured your heart and soul into it. Excellent job! Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Debbie, I love this poem. It flows so easily and perfectly. I'm at a loss for words. Amazing write. 5/5! Love always,

    -` Liz

  • 17 years ago

    by Yuna

    This is a very well done poem, and I am glad that I read it. I am into that stuff about fantasy!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mo

    Brilliant wording Debbylyn! I've added you to my favs cause I like your style of writing. 5/5 - Look forward to reading your next one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Oh.....This is so sadly lovely....I like to believe, though,that they will meet again in another life....under circumstances more conducive for their Love....Eternity is just too long!....
    You have a deep and compelling poetic gift...each piece I read has this effect on me......nice ta' meetcha'....;-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    It is a very good piece. It could fit many categories and it could take many different meanings.

  • 17 years ago

    by Anny

    This is an amazing way of words I'd believe that you were a pro! amazing!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Oh my, This is such a deep poem and very passionate...In some sort of way.
    Its so emotional and shows alot of detail.
    great job, I wish I could write like a true poet
    such as yourself!!
    xoxroxyxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Congratulations on winning my contest. This poem is perfect. It is now added to my list of favorite poems by you.....the list keeps growing every time you write a new one. I am amazed by your talent. Your poems are flawless.This poem is beautifully penned with impeccable rhythm and rhyme. It tugs at your heart strings. EXCELLENT JOB!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow, God I wish I could find the words to say more but I cant I'm shocked...that has to be the best poem I have read since I started writing on the site again. Fantastic. I have to add you to my favs. Well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    So much description, so much detail. very well written and the ending really proved that this poem was excellent.

    5/5 from me! David

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Such a dark and mysterious poem. the imagery that you get from this is spooky. well done that means.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Barry

    Speaks so much to me......
    there is no contest in my world

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautifully written...The imagery you created in this was breathtakingly done, it created very vivid pictures in my mind. The flow was flawless throughout the whole piece and the depth and emotion you put into this was easily felt. i loved every aspect of this poem, it all came together to create a truly beautiful read.