Comments : My Shining Star

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a sweet dedication to one who has lifted your spirits. Nice job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A lovely dedication.
    your words are so passionate.
    your friend, Tara-Kay

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    Hey Cindy, great job with this poem. beautifully worded!! xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Rafael

    How far is it from friendship to love?^^

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Just beautiful Cindy. It's amazing what the spirit of a friend can do! You have many...you are blessed! Love, Debbie

  • 11 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Awesome!

    Okay... the only ? I have is, did you mean to spell it shining with 2 n's on purpose? Other than that, it's so sweet!

    LOL,
    Rain

  • 11 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Aww..well thts good...my bro and i r close to but not as close as u2 i bet...keep on writing!! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Very nice poem! simple and very well written... keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Boy

    Very nice wrk... take care

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Do i know the one you have dedicated this to...i guess so.. :o))
    I really wonder what i have done to deserve this dedication but its surely very overwhelming.
    Thank you DOST for everything.

    all the best and take care

  • 11 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Aww. I wish I could write like this. This is such a pretty poem.

    5/5. Amazing Work Cindy!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by mary

    Wow this is an amazing poem, so very sweet and good, keep up the good work i love this poem.

    keep writing mary

  • 11 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    What a beautifully written masterpiece. This is one good friend and I'm glad you have that in your life. I love this poem and what it says.

  • 11 years ago

    by Yuna

    Very well done! I loved it very much and made me think of my own life. It was sweet.

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congrats Cindy! A beautiful poem from a beautiful heart! Love, Debbie

  • 11 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    That was so sweet. itz truely a blessing to find that one person that can pull u up wen the world has pushed u down. ur poem was gorgeous. well done xoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by Hebe

    Love it. Very good and sweet.
    Keep it up.

    Hebe

  • 11 years ago

    by Cherish

    Wow i loved it awsome job ur am awsome writer

  • 11 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    This poem is great

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was such a beautiful dedication, I'm sure it meant a lot to him.
    Wonderful wording, beautiful flow.