It was kinda funny.
I tried to tune it, but i'm tone deaf.
But i really did like this, it was kinda gory, and strange but still pretty neat.
love Tara-Kay

HAHA omg that is unbelieveably funny. I like how you added the tune. That is perfect for it too, because it is something recognizable to everyone. Wow, I really like the "head goes splat" part. Awesome. The only thing I would change is the ending. Because you are repetetive because it's a song, the ending is a little predictable. The things that surprise are what stay in my mind. But other then that it is absolutely fantastic, and indivisual. Keep it real.

~skittz

He he. funny but also not funny at the same time. but you got a laugh out of me. so for that it must be voted 5.

you stop the car to go watch him. funny. but its called manslaughter. lol. but who cares. so so funny anyway.

David

Well done, great job.......it is really really greatly written..... amazing how you come up with this idea,looool

by the way a 5/5 from me

Very good very funny good job i think it rocked. you keep doing your thing man

Well thats one way of getting rid of someone,why didn`t I think of that. funny!

Haha i memerized this and im singing it almost wherever i go lol dude good job

That was way cool, it kinda scared me, but it was gorgeous. LOL x forevor!
gabriella

This was so cool and funny,and i agree with Deana it's the way..........[: lol
Keep it up
See ya
LAURA

Aww i think its cool I'm just wondering what kinda toon it goes too? It's a cool lyric though nice job!

Ahhaha thats so funny!!! hahah omg i loved it! only thing is there are too many words to fit into the tune of a couple parts.

Hahaha...thats funny. i feel like doing that to a few people...hehe.

xoxo kisses

Unfurtunately i dont know the tune
(never bothered remembering songs unless they're metal, or maybe hard rock) and while alot of people seem to really like this poem i find it superficious. it hasn't affected me in any way. it didn't provoke my imagination or emotions to any extent.
nor did i find it paticularly funny.

Love is the law, love under will.
Rocky

HAHHAHAHA. That was awesome. I'd be laughing for real if I wouldn't get in trouble for being so loud. I sat here swaying to the tune, and mentally singing it. Great song!

5/5.

Made me laugh so it has to be good, well done
keep it up.