Comments : Whispers

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    Your poetry is like music that sings to the heart. Each beautiful word is like the note in a song. I love to read your work. Excellent! 5/5 Love You Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very beautiful yet full of sad emotion. Heartfelt and nicely penned. Excellent job. 100/5 from your #1 fan!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done. I loved this poem, it was so short, so sweet, and really powerful.
    your words touched my heart.
    well done again
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Soooo beautiful......
    sooooooooo beautiful..............

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  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    So beautiful.....

  • 10 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a really nice poem!
    enjoyed reading it
    keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nicely written, I wish it didn't end so soon. The flow as well as the structure was great. And your wording was outstanding. Keep up the amazing work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Abstractly Tangible ,Effectively Visual..I enjoyed reading this aloud.......Well-Done!

  • 10 years ago

    by Alvin Laberinto eNigmaa

    I want to see more lol. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Another very good poem debbie, such discription in your poem, and the flow is perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    That was very beautiful. Nice job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Great poem, short but powerful. Good job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    NO! Why'd it end!?!?! AH! Debbie, I loved this poem. This is one of the best poems I've read in such a long time. I don't even know what to say. this was just beautiful. FHSDFSd. I wish I could seriously say something better. But I just...wow. This was amazing. Never stop writing!

    -` Liz

  • 10 years ago

    by Kurt

    This was written with incredible skill. The words flowed and the whole poem radiated with emotion and feeling. This poem was truly amazing and I am stunned by this spectacular piece of work. Great great job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    That was. a good poem.. realy gr8 wrk

  • 10 years ago

    by kim

    Wow, your amazing, i love writing, and your my inspiration!

    Amazing Job!

  • 10 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very well worded. great write. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I have to be a fool for not reading it so far...this is just an outstanding and an amazing poem, usage of words and the picture it potrays just take you to some other world....and its surely a nice feeling.

    loved it

    all the best and take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Pheadrah

    One Beauty..powerful written, don't stop writing , we love your work

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats Deb!
    Told you it was beautiful. You have the magic. ~BRAVO~ Love Your Sis Cindy