Wow amazing poem! good 1! x

"Our love so shiny and new
With everyday it grows more and more
So many in the world, yet so few
Who share a bond as strong as me and you"

Just amazing. Great poem.

I loved this. it was so sweet, the words were great as well. you have such a talent, keep up the great work david!
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Its really good... i could feel the love flowing in this poem! your really good... wow... keep it up!

Hey.
Again a fantastic poem.

'So many in the world, yet so few
Who share a bond as strong as me and you'

So true. The way you've put it is great.
Keep it up!

This poem is so sweet. I wish someone felt the same about me. Another great poem of yours.
Keep up the good work.

Kalee

Aw this is a really sweet poem. It had a really good flow and I think it's an easy one to relate to. 5/5

marcella

Wow...This poem left me speechless it was great your a great poet and u have excellent talent!

This is beautiful. Wonderfully written. 5/5.

I LOVED this.
The wording and imagery were breathtaking, and the first stanza had me hooked.
My favourite part was the last stanza, I thought it was beautiful and it had suge great impact.
Exellent work.

Very nice poem i really enjoyed reading your poem very nice it really touched me!!♥!♥

I like this poem , u a good at writing poetry ^_^

In my dream I am crawling
So ever near to your love

I love those lines a lot . Creative and different [: It bugged me that it seemed like you would rhyme and stop since I`m used to rhyming poems, but either way, this poem was a great write (:
..__MiNDYY