To you who took the time

by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   Feb 12, 2007


To you who,
care I thank you big
you save me from this hole I dig
to took the time
to share a rhyme
and now I see you through

to all of those poeple that held me close and never let me go. i thank yo uall for your support.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Good idea, give credit where credit is due. excellent

    your servant:
    david

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This poem is short seems more like a quote.. and the last rhyme seems forced.. also.. you change tenses so the poem doenst make sense.. first you say "you SAVED me" (past tense) "from this whole i DIG" (Present tense)

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