Comments : Broken

  • 17 years ago

    by snoweyes

    "Where all my hopes are hidden
    And dreams that leave me crying
    Are lost among the stems of yesterday"
    This is such a beautiful way of letting out pain. It really captures what your feeling and it really let me feel that.
    Love,
    Irish Chicka

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was an amazing poem, really touched home with me great write, very well written love the love part , really did hit the spot thanksfor sharing , it tears into my heart, thanks:
    Where all my hopes are hidden
    And dreams that leave me crying
    Are lost among the stems of yesterday.
    your friend Tracy dean 5/5 my friend you did well.

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Hey, Beautiful piece. I really enjoyed reading this. It touched me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    A good poem, although it didn't flow well, it flowed well. Yes, I know that makes no sense. But that's how it was. It left me with a very bitter, almost sweet feeling.

  • 13 years ago

    by recklessdreamerx3

    I love all your poems. this one especially.