Comments : My Everything

  • 17 years ago

    by  tEEo

    Absolutely beautiful. I gave you 5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh, this was so prettyful.
    The imagery was astounding and the wording was beautiful.
    A real pleasure to read.
    You did a wonderful job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very sweet and beautiful. Nice rhythm and rhyme. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Because to me you're everything,
    The sky, the stars, the moon,
    Your love is a song I'll forever sing,
    To me its the sweetest

    tht was the gr8 words which i want to say her. thx for giving me tht words. very good poem.... gr8 wrk...

  • 17 years ago

    by Shauna

    Ohhhh my god! that was both excellent and beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! you are brill!! 5/5!!
    Shauna XxXxX <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a very well pened poem! love the use of word you put into it... and the way you discribed everything...
    its amazingg ... you really have the tallent in writtin... keep it up always!

  • 17 years ago

    by awww

    Such a beautiful poem... im left speechless right now... for this is something that i would write but never did... love it completely... its been some time since i could feel anything... been apathetic for quite a while... thank you for writing this poem... i could feel again...

    ~angel~

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    So pretty and romantic,especially those

    If the stars should fall from the sky,
    To crush my hopeful dreams,
    Then in this tree is where I'll die,
    With my heart torn at the seams.
    good job really,keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    This poem was written with such eloquence. Your wording was exquisite and I absolutely loved your rhyme scheme. You are a very talented writer and you choose your words very well. great write.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Another beautiful poem.
    You're very talented.
    keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww this is super cute! I loved it nice job! great write

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Beautiful! I loved the first stanza. Great read! 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    I really love this poem it is filled with emotions, good word usage

  • 17 years ago

    by Afraid of the Dark

    One word. . . Beautiful

    Laura
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Marinell

    Awesome.. i cried while reading this poem.. i wish someone would write me a poem as beautiful as this.. sigh..

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. i ljust love your writing...its beautiful.. all of it is. its just wow...i really dont have much to say.

  • 17 years ago

    by kate

    Wow that is soooo sweet karl
    well bloody done
    i had tingles
    beautiful!!!
    xxx
    xx
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by carla

    A romantic poem that shows compassion i loved it-5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    "Because to me you're everything," this line was very nice it sounds from your heart. nice really good 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Beautiful.
    So romantic to read.
    The imagery was amazing - everything was in my mind while reading.
    & the emotions were so powerful when read.
    This has got to be one of my favorite poems by you. Fantastic job! Keep writing.
    5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.