I loved this poem, especially the way you described the nature around you.

I also like the ending it was lovely and really sad though.

Great job! =)

5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

I really like this poem. It's alot like how I feel at the moment. A beautiful piece of writing.

Beautiful poem I enjoyed it.

I can really relate to your poem, right now Im going through somewthing's and I feel like you wrote it to me to let me know that everything's gonna be okay. out of 1-10, I'd give you 2thousand.

What a really lovely poem.
I could picture your words in my mind
that is what a good poem is all about.
thank you for sharing

This is excellent work, lovely flow nice word useage.. i like it very much, good feelings... 5/5 very nice.. dont stop writeing
-Marina.

This is a very good poem.keep it up =^-^=

Awh hOw bEautIful :D

Very nice. Beautiful poem.

For sum reason im a little confused! its good tho

Wow. this is one of the most beautiful poems ive ever read. keep up this beautiful talent.

No matter what had come between us
No matter all the tears and the pain
I still loved him as deeply as ever
And as the night went on
I knew I always would...

these words are such a grat words. they made me thought about my love. tht was such a great poem.. take care

That was beautiful! keep up th gud work! xoxo

I love this poem. its beautiful. keep up the great writing. :]

Beautiful. i could completely relate to this. it felt as if it was me. your words are wonderfully picked and perfectly put together.