Um. wow.
This was amazing.
It was sad, because the boy shouldn't have died. He should have thought rationally, but then again, there wouldn't be a poem if he did.
great write. wonderful descriptions.
5/5

I think this was Metaphorical. It wasn't the boy who died, it was actually just the boys love for the girl, the love he thought never would die.

I don't know if i like it or hate it.

*speachless*

5/5