I love it. one part boldness, one part truth, and one part stepping on the bad man's toes. you're all like cross the rubicon and stuff. i liken your poems to a twelve foot tall viking warrior with a dainty pen in one hand and a club in the other. but i digress

your servant:
david

This is really well written it definitely deserves a 5! and thanks so much for the comment I did put my heart into it.. I tried to make it seem like something a firefighter would be thinking.. how much courage they had.. they're true heroes..

United we have sworn to stand!!! that was definitely my favorite part it was a good poem I think its definitely my new favorite of yours. i think it really touches the readers.
5/5 always
ur fave
Kate~