Wow this was so haunting really dark but yet in its own way sweet, i like the craziness of it almost psychopathic, wow!!!

I loved that, and it really is true. I know alot of people that say they would take a bullet for someone, but would instead just push them. Plus, if you think about it hard, then it has a much deeper meaning, yuo may or may not have intended for that, but i t does. good work, I gave it 5/5

~Alicia

I loved this poem because it really meant so much more than the cliché of dying for the one you love. Great poem. The rhythm and passion carried the meaning through the text like a boat through water.