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But of course i can't really comment on the poem cos i co-wrote it, but the parts you did?
Of course, i'm biased with anything you write, lol
Great work honey
Love you xx
by ..::Angel of your darkness::..
Lol i think this was really cool poem, i love how you've wrote it, 5/5 good idea
Very catchy ,I loved the line about the mirror,not that it fit me or anything.....lol
by Angel of Death
I liked the part about the TV
Congrats on getting the front page honey!
You so deserve it =)
Love you xxx
by luna bella
LOL truly funny it's great
This is an awesome poem good job to both of you
It was like a mix of sadness and humor
Haha this is sooo awesome! great job, i can tell you put a ton of thought into this!!! SaWEET!
This is a very funny way of looking at things. You and Gem did a excellent job on this. 5/5 Take Care Cindy
This poem is very catchy..... I like it.
You're doing well honey
Keep it up
Love Gem xxx
Why'd you put that under funny? I woulda chosen love poems.
This is very good! 5/5
Haha! This is clever. I liked it.
Totally cute...yet sad and mixed with happiness at the same time.... ~.:.tara.:.
Haha. This was really cute. I think I liked the toaster and pillow parts best, they made me giggle.Lol.
I loved it!
Keep it up.
Very clever :] liked it 5/5