Valentines Day (Acrostic)

by Italian Stallion   Feb 14, 2007


Valentines Day
A day to remember, or a day to forget
Love, hearts, flowers and chocolates, even
Edible roses and hearts
Nothing more than a sweat gesture
To the one you truly love
It doesn't make sense, that
No one does this everyday for their love
Entwined they should always be
Safely in each others arms

Day in and day out, no matter what, we should always care for our loved ones
A love that should last through the seconds, minutes, hours, days, and years
Yes it's true, we should always love, no matter what, not just on Valentines Day

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title. Pretty straight forward, no rhyme scheme or syllable count.
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  • 10 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Aw,great poem.
    I love Valentines Day.
    well...5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 10 years ago

    by Melly

    That was a great Acrostic poem, so true and powerful. I hope to hear more from you. -Melly

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    Yay!! Finally, someone else who agrees with me!!! Valentine's day should be everyday! Well...you know...people should give/get roses, chocolates and love everyday. Not just one specific day. I loved this write, Joe. 5/5

    -` Liz

  • 10 years ago

    by Lauren Crandall

    Hum. Well Joe, i have to say, i dont think this is your best. but i do really like it.

    The probs-
    sweat ---sweet .. lol. unless you mean a sweaty treat. xD
    It doesn't make sense, that
    No one does this everyday for their love
    this part slightly confused me. i had to read it a few times to get what you were saying.

    Also- the DAY part, was.. odd. because the lines were so long. it like took away from the acrostic!

    But i loved the message, and it was well written, i just kinda think you could have done better.... o.o

    xLauren

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    WHOA! It spells Valentines Day! AW! That's so cool! I didn't even notice that at first! =D "Even edible roses" that made me laugh! I love those edible roses! I only ever had... one, but I think I bought that for myself.. How sad! lol. Great poem, Joe! Keep it up!!!! lol.

    ~~Teres