Very true sentiments Joe....nicely done! Happy Valentine's day to you! Debbie

I like this one more than the other, but they are both very well done.

I liked this: It doesn't make sense, that
No one does this everyday for their love
Entwined they should always be
Safely in each others arms

^Since you turned the poem into what you SHOULD be doing, and not just on Valentines Day, in the middle of the acrostic, it became much more interesting and meaningful. Great job.

I loved this piece. This is what seems to me, anyway, what Valentines should be like. Beautiful work in an interesting style. I really liked this piece a lot.

*5/5

Aww thats cute <3

I agree, thats why leo and i don't do anything special, we already know we love each other more than anything else valentines day, i dunno i just don't see why we shouldn't have one special day to let the ones whom we may have forgot to tell we love them know we still care?

~brittany

I agree that we should show how much we care about the people we love everyday and not just on Valentines day, but I do think it's a special day. Anyways, I loved the poem. I haven't read an acrostic poem in a while, and you did a wonderful job with it.

I enjoyed reading this. It was very different. It seemed in the middle of the poem you made it about what should be done during Valentines Day and not what [is] done, which really helped the meaning.
The flow, sorry to say, really wasn't in my favor; it didn't flow for me. Nor did it rhyme [and I'm not partial to non-rhyming poems].
However, you did a beautiful job, keep it up.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

I totally agree. great job.

Very true about how we should do this every day not just on one day out of the year. great poem. Lol i love reading ur poetry Joe its always really really good. keep it up =]!

Always,
Mel

Very sweet n true also...5/5

God bless u

Really touching and sweet,i liked the wxpression,well done,keep it up

I think Valentines day is a scam for people to buy stuff..... but yeah the thought is nice..
keep up the good work!

Very nice Joe, i love the style and the way it came together. very nice.

Great poem loved it, keep it up,
Prolly the best love poem i've ever read 5/5!

Wonderful poem Italian man, You are very good at writing these types of poems. =] 5/5

Wonderful poem Joe. And people should show love everyday not just on valentines day. Good job 5/5

A great job on this style, and yes every day should be a day to show love,a beautiful thought.

Very nice, i liked how you put in such good points of how we should do this every day, and your completely right..it makes no sence that this showing of love is focused on this day...wow...well i liked this poem..good job 5/5

Another beautifully written poem joe, as i said before i like acrostics and this one is perfect, you know i gotta give it a 5/5!!!! keep making them this good!!!

You managed to write this with such flow that i didnt even notice it was acrostic (apart from the name) they are normally so forced but this was not at all, well done