Comments : Valentines Day (Acrostic)

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very true sentiments Joe....nicely done! Happy Valentine's day to you! Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by maynes

    I like this one more than the other, but they are both very well done.

    I liked this: It doesn't make sense, that
    No one does this everyday for their love
    Entwined they should always be
    Safely in each others arms

    ^Since you turned the poem into what you SHOULD be doing, and not just on Valentines Day, in the middle of the acrostic, it became much more interesting and meaningful. Great job.

  • 10 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    I loved this piece. This is what seems to me, anyway, what Valentines should be like. Beautiful work in an interesting style. I really liked this piece a lot.

    *5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jesika

    Aww thats cute <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    I agree, thats why leo and i don't do anything special, we already know we love each other more than anything else valentines day, i dunno i just don't see why we shouldn't have one special day to let the ones whom we may have forgot to tell we love them know we still care?

    ~brittany

  • 10 years ago

    by Cayce

    I agree that we should show how much we care about the people we love everyday and not just on Valentines day, but I do think it's a special day. Anyways, I loved the poem. I haven't read an acrostic poem in a while, and you did a wonderful job with it.

  • 10 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I enjoyed reading this. It was very different. It seemed in the middle of the poem you made it about what should be done during Valentines Day and not what [is] done, which really helped the meaning.
    The flow, sorry to say, really wasn't in my favor; it didn't flow for me. Nor did it rhyme [and I'm not partial to non-rhyming poems].
    However, you did a beautiful job, keep it up.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    I totally agree. great job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Simply Complex

    Very true about how we should do this every day not just on one day out of the year. great poem. Lol i love reading ur poetry Joe its always really really good. keep it up =]!

    Always,
    Mel

  • 10 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very sweet n true also...5/5

    God bless u

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really touching and sweet,i liked the wxpression,well done,keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    I think Valentines day is a scam for people to buy stuff..... but yeah the thought is nice..
    keep up the good work!

  • 10 years ago

    by Alessandro

    Very nice Joe, i love the style and the way it came together. very nice.

  • 10 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Great poem loved it, keep it up,
    Prolly the best love poem i've ever read 5/5!

  • 10 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Wonderful poem Italian man, You are very good at writing these types of poems. =] 5/5

  • Wonderful poem Joe. And people should show love everyday not just on valentines day. Good job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Deana

    A great job on this style, and yes every day should be a day to show love,a beautiful thought.

  • 10 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Very nice, i liked how you put in such good points of how we should do this every day, and your completely right..it makes no sence that this showing of love is focused on this day...wow...well i liked this poem..good job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    Another beautifully written poem joe, as i said before i like acrostics and this one is perfect, you know i gotta give it a 5/5!!!! keep making them this good!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    You managed to write this with such flow that i didnt even notice it was acrostic (apart from the name) they are normally so forced but this was not at all, well done