Haha I like it :). the rhythm never faltered, you had great word use, and your rhyming was great. I love how you rhymed cliche and day...also, this wasn't like a whole ''pour your hear out'' type thing...those should be reserved for anniversaries ;). this perfectly serves the purpose.
I totally loved this poem! I usually don't read poems that aren't in the love category or depression, but I just had to read it! It was very beautiful and you totally made your point in it. Whoever you wrote this to is very lucky =) I thought of my boyfriend Tyler whenever I read it. Great job! 5/5 <3 <3 <3
Hahah very cute poem, and easy to read...the flow was nice and yes in a way it was cliche but it was such a great poem that really didn't matter...its kinda nice having someon say something positive about valintines day and not just that it sucks, but anyways good work----tara