Comments : Happy Valentine's Day

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nicely written. I liked it. The flow as well as the structure was good. Keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by Tripp

    Haha I like it :). the rhythm never faltered, you had great word use, and your rhyming was great. I love how you rhymed cliche and day...also, this wasn't like a whole ''pour your hear out'' type thing...those should be reserved for anniversaries ;). this perfectly serves the purpose.

    very good, I like it alot.

    keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    I think this poems really good.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sourav

    To me it's a real good poem... Very well written... Great work!

  • 9 years ago

    by Kayla

    I totally loved this poem! I usually don't read poems that aren't in the love category or depression, but I just had to read it! It was very beautiful and you totally made your point in it. Whoever you wrote this to is very lucky =) I thought of my boyfriend Tyler whenever I read it. Great job! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 9 years ago

    by Lemma

    I "aww-ed" out loud when I got to the end of this poem. Last year was the first valentine's day I got to spend with my boyfriend =) Very cute xXx

  • 9 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    I did what lemma did. i aww-ed too!! this is a cute insperational poem that has good flow and rythem and i love it!!!! 5/5 !props!

  • 9 years ago

    by LC XxLoveIsSuiCidexX

    Haha it just kinda flows i like it alot Happy Valentie's Day <3

    LC

  • 9 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awww this is a sweet poem...one that makes ya feel all warm and fuzzy inside lol. two thumbs up. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    This poems all happy and nice :D i love it

  • 9 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awww. That was adorable. It was cute, yet sophisticated. A lot of people can relate to that feeling, I know I sure can. It's the best, and you showed it well.

  • 9 years ago

    by Tara

    Hahah very cute poem, and easy to read...the flow was nice and yes in a way it was cliche but it was such a great poem that really didn't matter...its kinda nice having someon say something positive about valintines day and not just that it sucks, but anyways good work----tara