Very relatable, to me atleast. this poem is basically how i feel. very nicely written. keep it up, and good luck with your situation.

Awww hun i'm so sorry, i know how it feels, trust me. but hey, you got a wonderful poem out of it! lol. great flow, great job 5/5

That reminds me of the songs ive been hearing lately. Really well put together and emotional, a very vivid image. Very well written. 5/5

What a wonderful write. I really loved this poem. Excellent job!

Great, first poem i have read, and if your other poems are as good as this one i won't step away from my computer.

This is really sad... ya and i know how it feels when the one u like is goin out with some1 else... its hard... but always keep ur head up!

very nice poem!

Very well done! theres nothing i can say that will make this poem any better, you did a great job, and it falls right into place as a sequal to radio talk. wel done

Narc xxx

I absolutely loved this.
I think this is even better than Radio Talk!
The word choice was wonderful, and the whole piece flowed very well.
The imagery created was breathtaking and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme muchly.
I loved the metaphor too.
Wonderful work.

This was a great poem a lot of emotion and i thought it was very well written 5/5

I really like this.

I loved this!! it was so original! especially this bit,
"The radio is out of tune.
The static can't bring me back to you."
i absolutely loved it. well done
much love and many kisses,
bex

Haha..this is awesome, i love the poems that tell such a descriptive story...you get a very vivid image in your head, amazing work

Wow this is awesome! I love how your made it all work together. Two thumbs up!