Overdose

by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm   Feb 15, 2007


My world is falling apart..
The walls are closing in..
I am a voodoo doll..
Pills are holding the pin.

I feel the walls crumble..
The floor begins to shake..
I've got nowhere to go..
And my heart is about to break.

Finally it begins..
The foundation forms a crack..
There isn't much time left..
And there is no going back.

I'm lying in the rubble..
I hope that you can see..
Follow the sound of my cries..
Be the one that saves me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxSilentEyesxX

    Wow that was a good poem you explained it very well keep writing !!

  • OMG...i absolutely loved this poem...it has to be one of my favorites..it had good flow and nice metaphor...great work!
    Jonda Beth

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    Wow....this was so sad, but very beautifully written. You are an awesome poet. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by shutout

    Very nice

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