Comments : Is That Stardust in Your Eyes

  • 17 years ago

    by Zach-E

    I liked this a lot, good imagery.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Very nicely done. Great flow and diction.

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Hey! I haven't read any of your new poems for a long time, so I thought I'd check in. Are you still in EOP?

    This was a nice poem! I escpecially liked the line "Do you see the flames that flicker as the crackle breaks the night." - Excellent rhythm, and A nice visual. The flames as "little dancers" was very cool, as well. You seem to have found the style that suits you best... right (or 'write') on!

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    The title is what caught my eye right away. And than the poem just about made me cry haha, why I do not know but it really did. It just reminded me of something...you have an amazing talent Dear, and I am sure that you hear that a lot. ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow a beautiful writre once again, as lush fcuk says, the title is very eye-catching. the word choice is really good too, and forces the reader to want to read on. is devine another way of writing the word divine? im not really sure, jus wondering. anyway great work hun 5/5
    nuff luv xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    U r very good with the imagery keep it up!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Good, in a rather odd way. It didn't seem to rhyme, it didn't seem to flow and yet it did both somehow. This poem ends at exactly the right moment, too. Wonderful peice! I love it, it's one of my favorites.