You are talented...that was a very good poem

~amore~

First of all two thoughts

"I stayed up missing you; I even cried a tear" i think that the word 'cried' doesnt fit for it says cried a tear and saying cried makes readers think of many tears

and

"With you I can't fail but with you I can succeed"

is it supposed to be with you i can't fail, and with you i succeed? or with out you i can fail, but with you i can succeed?

other wise this poem was beautifully written and it realy brought out the emotion in it all. great work.

I really liked this poem it was nicely written with a great tribute to the one you wrote this for. I do agree with the person above me with those 2 little errors but overal this was cute and sweet love poem~mel

Its alright i suppose, its not my cup of tea.
i dont personaly think that this took very much thought, and the vocabulary is very young.
versed vocab. comes from time and a longer thought process. this is just my personal oppinion on this.

Okay, much. much better than any of the others I've read. It was powerful, nicely worded, flowed well,for the most part. A couple of errors. I think my favorite part was...

"Even though you hurt me you were so easy to forgive
Probably because without you was so difficult to live
But now it is easier because all of the love you give
Now I'm happy because I once again have a reason to live

It was really good. aaaa Stazas are not easy to write well enough to be a good poem. for viewers that is. It was great though, you pulled it off, nice work, keepit up. 5/5
-Ally

I don't know.
I stopped at the word, boo.
I hate that word.
It's, like, BABY!
ECK!
I'm a feminist.
I'm sorry.
I refuse to read this poem.
I'm really, really sorry :]
I'll still rate you, though :]

Absolutely excellent!! Before I read this poem it was hard imagining something so sweet coming from a guy- no offence. Stunning job!

''Even though you hurt me you were so easy to forgive
Probably because without you was so difficult to live''

I adore those two lines...they are very hardhitting and intense.
I really loved this poem...the first stanza was such a beautiful opener, with each stanza better than the last.
Flow was flawless for the most part, but on the last part it seemed a couple sllyables of.

Apart from that however, you did a beautiful job with this, I frikken love it!

Wow, This poem is so deep and heart fulfilling.
It is absolutely amazing! I think I will read more of your poems. I dont know something about your poems make me want to carry on though when I get to the end im disappointed..because I cant read anymore cause its the end xx Rox

I guess it was okay...
I didn't love it, this partially due to the rhyme scheme and the material itself. It reminded me of a card that you would buy at a pharmacy.
I didn't hate it but I am not compelled to read it again.

Very well written! nice job 5/5