Comments : How did I end up here?

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    This was ok. Every teen goes through this, so it seemed a lot like a teen rant. I wouldn't be suprised if you get many comments about how people can relate to this (especially girls) as it's a common issue. I know I went/ am going through the same thing.
    To compliment the common subject it would have been nice to see some new language, something more "poetic" maybe.
    I think you have a few typos aswell.
    On the fifth line of the fourth stanza it should be "you're."
    Also, on seventh line of the final stanza you have "can seems" so either "can seem" or "seems" would work there.
    Ok thanks for sharing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    5 out of 5 and I've finally got done rating and commenting all your poems. I've been on a roll tonight, but anyway's keep up the good work and I hope to see more of your poems soon.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Your poem will reach many, letting them know that they "aren't alone"!

    Nicely done.