I love you.

Matthew

Awww...amazing!

Another lovely one. I was caught up by the title, and just as caught up by the poem.

5/5
Ravyn

Oh wow. I really loved that poem, the imagery was great your vocabulary is even better. I really loved the first stanza, it really stood out for me. Anyways, keep up the great writing.

5/5

I really like this piece, its got a lot of depth to it. Please keep writing you have wonderful talent

I freakin love this one it is really good
keep writing
-laura-

Wow! so sad! so well written!!! i usually HATE the use of speach in a poem, but you carried it off flawlessly!! GREAT WORK!!! it kept me captivated through out!

This was a really good piece!
it was a little longer than poems i usually read, but you really kept my attention...
i like the way you write, so i think ill come back and read some more when i can :]

~Sandra

Excellent!

Well i'd notice to your piece that it always involves death, well it doesn't matter but i think your concepts suits all the same..but its okay!

keep it up!

Really deep. I really loved it. The title really pulled me in and the words flowed fabulously. keep up the amazing work. 5/5.

~KM~