Comments : Till Death Do Us Part [Tanka]

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    It don't rhyme no. but still is a great way to say a poem. so short yet perfect.

    5/5 always David

  • 10 years ago

    by donna

    A very nice poem... short yet very powerful... well done xx

  • 10 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    That was a very well written Tanka poem =] 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is a very different style of writing, I enjoyed it! Great write, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    I gave a 5/5 since haiku's like that are tough.

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    I loved it tammie. and that the way love is, till death do us part.

    5/5 always David

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessica

    I learned something neww, gr8 poem,, janaynay

  • 10 years ago

    by Fredy

    Great poem, short but to the point

  • 10 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I think this was really cute, and you did a good job at wording it really well hun. Very nice poem. I enjoyed it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Hmm...
    It's weird.
    50% of people in the US break that promise.
    They get divorced.

    So I liked how you wrote a poem about it
    And bolded the fact that once you make a promise, you keep it.

    5/5 :]