Comments : Protecting Myself From You

  • 10 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Very, very good write!! I too know what its like to hide behind walls and eventually, in time, you'll trade those steel walls for a white picket fence and a neatly trimmed yard with beautiful flowers to welcome someone new. Keep up the good work!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cuddles

    I see you still have that magical pen when it comes to writing. Nice to see you back. I've missed your work. I know this feeling well, but the way you captured it is simply amazing. Nicely done!!

  • 10 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Yay! You are writing again! It's nice to see you back on here. You did a great job on this one. =]

    Ciao

  • 10 years ago

    by Laura

    This was a great write. A lil sad but I could deinately relate...I did the same thing before and it did work for me..no matter how hard you try to set yourselkf free certain sounds or smells will always take you back in time but just be string and learn how to enjoy the past as well as move forward.

  • 10 years ago

    by StephanieMichelle

    I LOVE it!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by leinhart

    Thought u will never write again, hehe btw nice writing, and it does hurt to see someone u love with someone else...

  • 10 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Though there was a slightly less of a story here, I did like this poem. My favorite stanza was the second one, because of what was said plus it's flow, although a good flow was kept steady throughout.

    Brad

  • 10 years ago

    by malina

    Wow..hoping to read more

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

    PS. Plz rate and comment on some of my poems and I'll return the favour.

  • 10 years ago

    by JAYMA SUMMERS

    WOW I LOVED IT I HAVENT HEARD FROM YOU IN A LONG TIME!!!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

  • 10 years ago

    by Knee

    This is so cute =)
    I loved your last stanza the most...just you misspilled the word "memories"...
    but other than that, yur piece is very great!!

    keep up the great work
    G'luck!
    xOxOx

  • 10 years ago

    by Rocco

    I love all of your work.. It is easy to read.. And I can relate.

  • 10 years ago

    by secretlylovinghim

    Two words "love it"!!!!!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Awesome write!

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    You sure still have your talent. it wasn't rusty. i loved the title, drew me to the poem. and the words you used were so unique and fresh. well done.

    5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Very Good, write, I loved it....:)

  • 10 years ago

    by l0VEiSPAiN

    Ii l0VE iit S0 mUCH
    Y0U S0 TAlENTED!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Blissful

    Another amazing poem you have here. The emotion here was just flawless. Congrats, you have just made my favorites :]

  • 9 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    You came very highly recommended for me to check out and i have to say, i'm impressed. this was a beautifully written piece. the imagery, emotion and depth, content, concept and flow all came together to create a truly beautiful read. filled with suci melancholy and hopelessness yes. but a beautiful piece of art nontheless.

  • 9 years ago

    by secretlylovinghim

    This is really good along with all of you others it reminded me of exactly how i felt everyday when my exb/f walked by me with his girl i'd prolly still feel that way if i still lived there.... very very good keep it up!!