Hehe, love it, 5/5 glad I could be of assitance with it =)

Aw. this was really sad, i know those feelings all too well! chin up huni. xoxoxoxoxo b strong

Ah this was a really emotive poem. it showed true hurt and how it feels. but only a glimpse.

5/5 David

Wow great job its better than mine!!!! i love it its so true!!!!!! love can do so many things to u.... especially wen its hurt

Hey hun, thanks for ur comment and support. this is really sad to hear u write this sort of stuff and ur so young. ur an amazing writer for ur age, dont give up! just keep writing and ull just keep getting better, i promise. ur stuffs good. thanks for reading mine :) stay safe, dont give in. everythings has a solution other than pain. boys r made for that. dani x

Good job i like it

Hey nice poem :))
Its full of meanings,keep it up!!

It very sad. but i like it. *thumb up*

Hey i realli like it.
its realli good.
xx

Wonderfully written vent of sadness, 5/5. Em