This is very beautifully written....nice imagery and message. The flow is flawless as is the rhyme....all in all an awesome poem! 5/5 Debbie

Sad and beautiful. I like how the little angel is talking to the mum. Nice job!

Aww this poem is so sweet, it is so caring and gentle. well done i really like it xxxx hope you are well and take good care xx

Beautiful poem. I love to think that when we pass we are able to look over the loved ones we leave behind. Such a sad subject that you made into something soft and gentle.
Lovely flow to this poem, keep your attention the whole way through.

Great work.
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