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That is such a sweet poem David. It shows how you really feel. I also love how you wrote in a styled poem. It sometimes is harder and shows that you are capable of more complicated poetry, which I know you can do, you are so talented. =] 5/5 For this. It shows how much you really love her. =]

Tammie xo

This is so sweet, thx so much for the comments, they mean so so so much to me, i added you to my favorites too,
luv gabriella

Aww this was great I lvoed it your poems are so enjoyable

I love this, it's short and simple yet it hold so much beauty

This poem was good not great like the other 2 were, well i give it a 4/5

Awww this is a very beautiful and sweet poem! i can feel the love in it! you did an excellent job! 5/5

~Kristina