Comments : I'm Afraid That I'm Afraid of Intimacy

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    I really like how this is so conversational, and yet still poetic. I think people often worry too much about making things sound "like a poem..." and then they end up just sounding forced, where this was very natural. I also this this poem ended nicely - a good slowing down to a concise ending.