The Treacherous Love

by Sarah   Feb 26, 2007


Why is love so powerful and so unmerciful?
When it grasps us in its choking embrace, threatening to never let go
Keeping its tight hold and killing the prey ever so slowly

Why is it so unafraid?
When it infiltrates the body with its impurities
Leaving an eternal scar of selfishness and lustfulness
Keeping the body alert of it's presence when it is not sought

Love has dual names
One of which is love itself and the other remaining nameless, leaving any being under its scorn overwhelmed
Like the forbidden fruit and it's watchful eye, making contact without a single touch
Often embedding the mind with no other thoughts but itself

There are many who seek love to embrace it
The search resulting as a gruesome one, when it is never found
Even if it is found, due to the consequences that can come from it

Is it love that is impure or is it people?
Are we the wilted flowers among the seemingly unblemished garden?
Or is it right to accuse love of it's injustices?

Is it even love that is being spoken of?
Maybe it isn't
Maybe it's simply a different specimen
One that is haunting and drives the sanest of men to madness
Maybe it goes by another name, one that is unfamiliar to the world I know
One that exists elsewhere and keeps people at bay
Teasing and taunting and beholding the power it's manifestation has on the petty souls of human beings

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  • 17 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    I agree with cindy it does make yo u think about things! and this poem was really gooD! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job. Really makes you think about thigs.
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    "Is it even love that is being spoken of?
    Maybe it isn't
    Maybe it's simply a different specimen
    One that is haunting and drives the sanest of men to madness"
    i have to say that this is my favorite part, and i think your writing is really good, like i mean you really get the point in to the poem, but i do think you need to work on the flow alot, so that it will be easier to read.
    luv gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Ok it was good but there are some things u need some help with i didnt really understand the flow to much and it kinda took me to a different track 3/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    Amazing.

    That's all I have to say. Amazing, incredible, unbelieveable, heart-breaking, emotional.

    It is amazing, holds so many ideas to wonder about. Makes my mind whirl with thoughts, great job. Best poem I have read all month.

    Alissa