This was a marvel to the senses! The smells, the sights, the wonderment at all new things bright and carefree, leaving behind all thats dark and supressed. Good work.

Mo

So much description. Your really talented. I love this poem..Its like hope, for when your feeling sh.itty.

Keep up the work.

Jadee
:)

Well my friend u have done it again!!! perfection achieved, bliss and sensuality is acute and serene, i feel every word all the way deep into my soul, wonderful work dont ever quit on your giftt...ever...email me sumtime just to know how u r doing... ok!!! ; )