Fatal Attraction?

by PoeticJustice   Feb 27, 2007


I cant tell because Ive never been here before
In this position, so confusing. dont know what to do
Maybe its a test of life, a way to grow stronger
Or maybe a waste of time, can it still continue any longer
Are we both in separate worlds with out a clue in our minds
Its like what we want is different, but we cant realize the fact
So confused, I'm asking questions to understand and know how you feel
I need feedback because silence makes it feel like its not real
Something has got to be there, something thats true
But what? It feels full of nothing, is that what love is?
It feels like I will never understand, or maybe you cant ever explain
I feel like its my fault its like this, and it drives me insane
I put my all into it , an I feel that you dont
Show me that your words are true with some action
Its all that I want, some action to help me believe
That its not just a Fatal attraction . Our hearts need to breath.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    "I feel like its my fault its like this, and it drives me insane
    I put my all into it , an I feel that you dont
    Show me that your words are true with some action
    Its all that I want, some action to help me believe
    That its not just a Fatal attraction . Our hearts need to breath."
    ____

    ^^ I loved those lines the most. I loved the whole thing, actually. It's different from most poems I've read from you, but I love it like the rest. I don't really know what to say...lol. Great write! Never stop writing!! 5/5

    -` Liz