Comments : Fatal Attraction?

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    "I feel like its my fault its like this, and it drives me insane
    I put my all into it , an I feel that you dont
    Show me that your words are true with some action
    Its all that I want, some action to help me believe
    That its not just a Fatal attraction . Our hearts need to breath."
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    ^^ I loved those lines the most. I loved the whole thing, actually. It's different from most poems I've read from you, but I love it like the rest. I don't really know what to say...lol. Great write! Never stop writing!! 5/5

    -` Liz