Wow great poem!

i loved the bit if you were to leave,
it would tear my world apart!!

i sort of know how that feels!

5/5 well done!!

Nicely done. I like your word choice and the flow is good.

Wow!!! i can feel you on this poem very strong words you have in this poem!!! keep up the good work!
-teardrop

Wow this is by far my favorite poem that you've written. Myabe even my favorite on this entire site, I liked all of the comparissons(sp?) in it and I liked how they all fit together in some sort of way. Thanx a lot for sharing this with me. a definate 5/5

Awww this is a really good poem. theres a lot of emotion in it. and it's a different type of poem, the way you wrote it. amazing job! keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

5/5 excellent! that IS the wow! =] lovee it. <33

-linds [x]

Beautifully written
i was mesmerized from the start...
keep it up
5/5
love
amy

I think this poem deserves a bit more then its rating. It's full of emotion... yet sad emotions; hence, maybe not as appealing. I can relate to your poem really well for I can feel the same emotions I once experienced... not so long ago. I think you will find similarities in my poem "Lost in the city". Any ways, great write. 5/5

Wow its amazing so many feelings that i had once ,,,, thanks for the coment by the way on Love, Infatuation
i give this poem 5/5..........xoxo erin

Aww this poem is so adorable!
At first I had a strange feeling that this poem wouldn't be good, but you proved me wrong. Next time I shouldnt assume, because I made an ASS out of ME(myself). Your imagery was excellent, the rhyming flow was brilliant, and the poem was just fabulous!
"Where only loneliness can dwell."
That was my favorite line. You also used strong vocabulary which was a.m.s.z.i.n.g.!
LOve it,
5.5

Tons of emotion and great rhymes... this is a beautiful poem. Mant lines really stood out to me, drawing me in. This is a wonderful write. 5/5

marcella

Wow great work..you used great words too...5/5 good job keep it up.

-steph

Awww... this is soo cute... wonderful write... the emotion is expressed beautifully... the flow and rhymes are spectacular .. great job! :D

Wow, excellent..i loved every aspect of it..i loved how ytou used the same format, great words and the flow never went wrong.:):)....i really liked the examples you used witht the heart without a beat and the iris without colour...brilliant:):)

I love it. i so understand. good job

I so love this poem!!
its really good.
i was just searching around and i found it.
your really talented you know.
sorry for just automatically talkin to you--im morg.
heyy if you wanna you can check out my poems.....Love ya! morg.

Awwww cute once again I like love poems!!

Very well said and with the heart 5/5 :))

Great ending ^_^

Lovely poem!