One night long

by *Isolde*   Feb 27, 2007


One night long
I sat on the window
I stared at the sky
While listening to the radio

The sky looked lovely
While the stars are shinning
I counted them
With very great timing

I stared at them
All night long
I admired them
Some what too long

Soon enough
I fell asleep
Then i woke up
And started to weep

I didn't know where I was
Nor did I know what to do
Then i noticed
I was over the moon

I was so happy
Because finally
I was up there close
So very close

It was the best
Out of all the rest
I didn't know how to explain
How it beat the rest

Now I'm happy
As happy as can be
I think ill take a walk
And feel the night breeze.

P.S: Thank you for reading...If you do not like this poem please don't comment...thank you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    To be honest this piece is good.

    I stared at them
    All night long
    I admired them
    Some what too long

    You could try changing the last line to make the flow better. Thats my advise.
    Tc

  • 17 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    This poem was great it made me smile alot i really liked it
    Take Care
    xoHSxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Great job nice poem i loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    4/5. it was really neat. =] different.. lol. i liked it. <3

    -linds [[x]]

  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Its not bad. The ryhme scheme messes up afew time and messes with the flow and all, but otherwise its well written.

    *4/5*

    [PygmyPuff]

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