5/5 lol. excellent. not exactly [sweet] which is good.. most poems are and it gets way too repetative.. and in the end you still got to the same message.. everyone else makes it as if all love is fine and dandy where yours says "yeah we fight.. so?" lol. good job. (y)

-linds[[x]]

I agree with ^^
And i think a lot of people can relate to this too
5/5
*gem*

Very good poem i know how you feel good job

Aw thats a real cute poem but i mostly like it because its real. It aint all that lovey dovey type its about goin through hard times and thats whats up. You good at what you do. Keep up the good work and i got a slang poem i just submited called *played you prolly like it...let me kno what you think.

I like this one cuz it deadass soundsz likeme n my ex we alwaysz talk mad shyt but then get baq 2getha

Hey this is really good especially the ending it's sweet and sad at the same time. i really liked "Escape" too. btw thanks for the comment!

Mixture of sweetness and sadness. nice poem..you really can write.