Comments : Fallen Angel Part II

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbylyn
    This poem is beautiful...the words you have used sing through out this write.

    Prayers unanswered heaven weeps
    As pouring drops the sadness seeps
    The Mystic wanders lost once more
    To search another distant shore

    This stanza brought tears to my eyes.
    Love you sis.

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    Debbie, I don't know what to say. I absolutely love this poem. I'm just speechless. I hate not having anything to say. ;P. Amazing write. Please, never stop!! Love always,

    -` Liz

  • 10 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is really awesome.

    Exhale my longing take my all
    Your patterns dance as moonlight falls
    Fate's fickle hand has had her way
    My Angel come to me I pray

    complete poem is really outstanding and i think this one deserves to be a winner for atleast a year's time on the contest....i really mean it.

    loved it

    all the best and take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    A sequel to my favorite poem. Wow. No one can do it better. You ROCK!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Sad and beautiful. Impeccable rhythm and rhyme. Perfect sequel to part 1. This 2 part masterpiece is my favorite and along with Poet's Pen are 3 of the best poems I have ever read in my life. AWESOME!!!!
    100,000/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow Debbie, I love all your poems. Very nicely written, the flow as well as the structure was great. I loved your word choice as well. Keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    An amazing sad poem. You really have incredible talent.
    Just wonderful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    HOLY SHIT.
    wow.
    wow.
    wow.

    Amazing!

  • 10 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very good write. beatifully dark. 5/5 from me.

  • 10 years ago

    by CrAzY LoVeR

    GREAT PEOM!

  • 10 years ago

    by StarLightxInHisEyes

    This is so amazing. U R Talented!

  • 10 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Wow this is a really great poem... you are extremely talented!! keep it up .xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Sarah

    I'm too speechless to comment but I'll still give it a shot. The writing was very descrpitive, passionate in its own way, speaks for itself. Amazing job.

  • 10 years ago

    by TwistedNightmare

    It was beautiful. Filled with so much emotion. I love this. If I could go higher than a five, I would give it a ten. I really would.

  • 10 years ago

    by Princess Love

    This poem is really awesome. Very descriptive and heartfelt. Loved it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    "Close your eyes, inhale my thoughts
    Quench my desire, no count the cost
    One beat alone, a dream of two
    Through blackest night, the light of you"
    Seems to say so much to me yet leaves me so alone......awesome 100/5...so beautiful....

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    Oh wow Debbie...

    "Prayers unanswered heaven weeps
    As pouring drops the sadness seeps
    The Mystic wanders lost once more
    To search another distant shore"

    My fave stanza of all and it was no easy feat to pick it out.
    You write so so beautifully..
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I love this poem!!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "Desiring what can never be, surrendering loss to destiny" <-- oh how i loved those lines. so much emotion and power. this was a beautiful follow up from part one. the imagery portrayed in this is stunning. coupled with a flawless flow and written with such beauty and grace, you outdid yourself here. as for the ending, what can I say? it was amazing. in my opinion, this is superior to part one, and i'm certainly looking forward to reading part three.