Sad and beautiful. Impeccable rhythm and rhyme. Perfect sequel to part 1. This 2 part masterpiece is my favorite and along with Poet's Pen are 3 of the best poems I have ever read in my life. AWESOME!!!!
"Close your eyes, inhale my thoughts
Quench my desire, no count the cost
One beat alone, a dream of two
Through blackest night, the light of you"
Seems to say so much to me yet leaves me so alone......awesome 100/5...so beautiful....
"Desiring what can never be, surrendering loss to destiny" <-- oh how i loved those lines. so much emotion and power. this was a beautiful follow up from part one. the imagery portrayed in this is stunning. coupled with a flawless flow and written with such beauty and grace, you outdid yourself here. as for the ending, what can I say? it was amazing. in my opinion, this is superior to part one, and i'm certainly looking forward to reading part three.