I really like your poem. Im going to my cousins baby shower tomorrow. She's 20, but I still really get your poem and now have respect for someone I don't even know. =D

Awe, Hunny. Such a sweet dedication to your cousin. I really liked it. For a non-rhyming poem it flowed really well. It was very heartfelt & so sweet & cute. Ah. I love children :]

Some things though :

First, The title.. I love it :] BUT. pregnet is actually spelled 'pregnant'

You're going to be the best you can be
and I have faith that you will try your best.

^ To be completley honest.. I didn't like the repitition of the word 'best' in both of those lines.. It made it sound kinda crowded & just crashed it.

and to touch your for the first time.
^ your should be 'you'

He might have you nose, or cheek,

^ you should be 'your'

You're brave for what you did and strong,
and you're brave to be 15 and pregnant.

^ Ok, I didn't really like the wording of the first line.. I think you should re-word it to: You're brave & strong for what you did. But that's just my opinion :]

Also, I don't like the repitition of brave in both of the lines.. They are just too close together [my opinion].

I still really loved this. I'll give it a 5/5. Overall rating though: about 4.6

Beautiful dedication, sweetie.

Bri [x]