I loved it! thats how it is with my friend music is his whole world its his escape from everything!! really good write! 5/5

Yikes my darlin!! Watch out for your mistakes from P&Q!!

I like your topic, but I think you could have developed it a lot more.

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As I said with the Storm, too many you's.

I like the ending of both stanzas. Very final, deliberate.

I don't really get the point of "Heaven Forbid". It starts off as making this poem seem negative. And by reading the rest of this poem, I had to realize otherwise. Quite confusing.

COMMERCIAL: Check out my poem Music. It follows the same theme.

Overall, not bad. I enjoyed the Storm much more though.

That is so brautifull!
I play piano , and the emotion you dicribed was bril!!
loved it!