Comments : Beautifully Broken

  • 17 years ago

    by cortneayy

    I really really like this one

  • 16 years ago

    by AngelWithTheBrokenWings

    I really like this poem.
    xxxx
    ..::Broken Lullaby::..

  • 16 years ago

    by Polly

    Love the poem, it has a powerful start that really draws you in. The flow was brilliant for most if it, although occasionally I felt the lines were too long in some stanzas, and in this verse I got a little lost:

    The chance that you wouldn't risk
    Of where you just then fall
    Where you believe it its meant to be
    Then its worth it all

    but it's a really beautiful poem, keep writing, and thankyou ever so much for the comment
    - Polly x

  • 16 years ago

    by LostKitsune

    It's long O.o but really good ^_^...keep up the good work XD